okay, so anyone who has read chapter 1 of My Little Hope: Caring is Magic will know who bad the grammer was (really really bad) but i when back to it and fixed every error i could find, and i also add some of the stuff i original cut, so think of it as a director's cut of the first chapter,here the
www.fimfiction.net/story/20986… to my story, as for chapter 4......it's getting there.
im going have it hopful at the end of this month.
me and ~OhStyx are working really hard to get this story going.
thank you for your time and have a nice day